#1071 Improve some wording.
Merged a year ago by bcotton. Opened a year ago by nielsenb.
nielsenb/fedora-websites arm-wording-fix  into  master

@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ 

        </div>

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          <div class="col-lg-3 product-feature">

-         <p>${_('These images are for ARM-based devices where a bundle of purpose-drive software is needed.')}</p>

+         <p>${_('These images are for ARM-based devices where a bundle of purpose-driven software is needed.')}</p>

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@@ -504,7 +504,7 @@ 

        </div>

        <div class="row">

          <div class="col-xs-12 product-feature">

-         <p>${_('These images are for ARM-based devices where a bundle of purpose-drive software is needed.')}</p>

+         <p>${_('These images are for ARM-based devices where a bundle of purpose-driven software is needed.')}</p>

          </div>

        </div>

        <div class="row">
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ 

        </div>

        <div class="row">

          <div class="col-xs-12 product-feature">

-         <p>${_('These images are for ARM-based devices where a bundle of purpose-drive software is needed.')}</p>

+         <p>${_('These images are for ARM-based devices where a bundle of purpose-driven software is needed.')}</p>

          </div>

        </div>

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@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ 

  	    <div class="col-xs-12 caption">

  	      <h2 class="text-center">${Markup(_('What is ARM&lt;span class="sup"&gt;&reg;&lt;/span&gt; Technology?'))}</h2>

  	      <p class="thin text-justify">${_('ARM microprocessors are the most widely-produced processor family in the world; they have historically been used in cell phones and embedded applications, and are increasingly used in tablet devices and low-power-consumption servers.')}</p>

- 	      <p class="thin text-justify">${_('The Fedora ARM project is an initiative to bring Fedora to this processor family. The images provided here are versions of Fedora tailored for running in on ARM-based systems.')}</p>

+ 	      <p class="thin text-justify">${_('The Fedora ARM project is an initiative to bring Fedora to this processor family. The images provided here are versions of Fedora tailored for running on ARM-based systems.')}</p>

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Correct a couple of wording issues.

rebased onto 4a594a0

a year ago

Pull-Request has been merged by bcotton

a year ago
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