http://fedoraproject.org/en/features/ has many grammatical errors. For example,
Fedora is free to share! Pass it along to your friends and family, no worry! (should be "no worries")
Fedora has been installed millions of times. It's a large community to join! works, but "It's a large community to join" doesn't make much sense.
Thoughts?
Suggestion for the "Fedora has been installed...". I would suggest something along the lines of:
{{{ Come and join our large and growing community of millions of users and installations. }}}
Sorry, would send a patch but I don't have a copy of the repo ATM
Nobody is working on this and we shouldn't add supplemental work to L10n teams for strings which with F21 release will disappear (we won't have any features any more on the websites).
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