From 82ad3c7748340c39dcc0894d6710d075f8d5695b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley@redhat.com>
Date: Nov 15 2013 09:14:02 +0000
Subject: en-US/BIND.xml | Improving the language.


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diff --git a/en-US/BIND.xml b/en-US/BIND.xml
index c6d2833..4f2f7d5 100644
--- a/en-US/BIND.xml
+++ b/en-US/BIND.xml
@@ -1762,7 +1762,7 @@ ns.icann.org.           12884   IN      A       192.0.34.126
     <important>
       <title>Make sure the feature is supported</title>
       <para>
-        Before attempting to use advanced features like DNSSEC, TSIG, or IXFR, make sure that the particular feature is supported by all nameservers in the network environment, especially when you use older versions of BIND or non-BIND servers.
+        Before attempting to use advanced features like DNSSEC, TSIG, or IXFR (Incremental Zone Transfer), make sure that the particular feature is supported by all nameservers in the network environment, especially when you use older versions of BIND or non-BIND servers.
       </para>
     </important>
     <para>
@@ -1859,7 +1859,7 @@ ns.icann.org.           12884   IN      A       192.0.34.126
       <secondary>common mistakes</secondary>
     </indexterm>
     <para>
-      The following is a list of advices how to avoid common mistakes users make when configuring a nameserver:
+      The following is a list of recommendations on how to avoid common mistakes users make when configuring a nameserver:
     </para>
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
@@ -1890,7 +1890,7 @@ ns.icann.org.           12884   IN      A       192.0.34.126
         <term>Configure the firewall</term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            If a firewall is blocking connections from the <systemitem class="service">named</systemitem> service to other nameservers, the recommended best practice is to change the firewall settings whenever possible.
+            If a firewall is blocking connections from the <systemitem class="service">named</systemitem> service to other nameservers, the recommended practice is to change the firewall settings.
           </para>
           <warning id="warning-Warning-Avoid_Using_Fixed_UDP_Source_Ports">
             <title>Avoid using fixed UDP source ports</title>