From a2282d02fa44d70236e44b70e5ed2b0e5eae5382 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ankur Sinha <sanjay.ankur@gmail.com>
Date: Oct 25 2023 08:27:14 +0000
Subject: Merge #646 `Change wording, fix typos`


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diff --git a/modules/ROOT/pages/upgrading-fedora-new-release.adoc b/modules/ROOT/pages/upgrading-fedora-new-release.adoc
index 8d3aa46..c1c2e4a 100644
--- a/modules/ROOT/pages/upgrading-fedora-new-release.adoc
+++ b/modules/ROOT/pages/upgrading-fedora-new-release.adoc
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
 [IMPORTANT]
 ====
-. Make your system *fully up-to-date* before attempting system upgrade to a new Fedora release.
+. Make sure your system is *fully up-to-date* before attempting a system upgrade to a new Fedora release.
 . Be sure to *back-up your data* before upgrading your Fedora system in the event something breaks and leaves your system unusable.
 . Read the xref:fedora:release-notes:index.adoc[Release Notes] carefully before attempting an upgrade.
 ====
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
 [NOTE]
 ====
-This is the recommended upgrade method for the Fedora Workstation.
+This is the recommended upgrade method for Fedora Workstation.
 ====