From 3268bfb051a69dc7d788142530a94dea472b1e56 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthew Miller <mattdm@fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mar 01 2022 21:06:52 +0000
Subject: These are wording changes that I _also_ do not think change the meaning but make everything flow better.


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diff --git a/council/modules/ROOT/pages/policy/edition-promotion-policy.adoc b/council/modules/ROOT/pages/policy/edition-promotion-policy.adoc
index ba9348b..45a396b 100644
--- a/council/modules/ROOT/pages/policy/edition-promotion-policy.adoc
+++ b/council/modules/ROOT/pages/policy/edition-promotion-policy.adoc
@@ -11,19 +11,19 @@ This document describes the process for promoting an existing Fedora deliverable
 
 A Fedora Edition:
 
-* Addresses a new,
+* addresses a distinct,
   relevant,
   and broad
   use-case or userbase
   that a Fedora Edition is
   not currently serving.
 
-* The use-case should be
-  something the Council sees as 
-  a long term investment.
+* is a long term investment
+  for the Fedora Project.
 
-* The Edition should be consistent
-  with all of Fedora's foundations.
+* is consistent
+  with all of
+  Fedora's foundations.
 
 
 == Prerequisites
@@ -46,12 +46,16 @@ NOTE: It is helpful to have someone on the team assigned to handle the bureaucra
 
 == Process
 
-When all of the prerequisites have been met, the team submits promotion as a System-Wide Change.
+When all of the prerequisites have been met,
+and approved by the Fedora Council,
+the team submits promotion as a System-Wide Change.
 This ensures that Release Engineering, FESCo, and the community at large have the opportunity to provide input.
 It also implies that the promotion may be delayed to the next release if the appropriate supporting pieces are not in place by the Beta or GA freezes.
 
 Prior to submitting the Change proposal, the following tasks should be completed:
 
+* *Approval from the Council.*
+  File a ticket and participate in related discussion.
 * *Review test cases and release criteria with QA.*
   The QA team will draft test cases and release criteria based on the PRD.
   However, the Edition team must verify that these are valid.