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#82 coreos: update titles and descriptions
Merged 4 years ago by rfairley. Opened 4 years ago by abai.
fedora-web/ abai/websites coreos-download  into  master

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    <div class="container">
 

      <div class="row align-items-center">
 

        <div class="col-12">
 

-         <h1 class="font-weight-light">{% trans trimmed %}Download Fedora CoreOS (preview).{% endtrans %}</h1>
 

-         <h5 class="font-weight-light">{% trans trimmed %}Try running containers in the latest preview release of Fedora CoreOS.{% endtrans %}</h5>
 

-         <p>{% trans trimmed %}Preview releases of Fedora CoreOS should not be used for production workloads. Fedora CoreOS may change in incompatible ways during the preview period. Additional platforms and functionality will be added over the coming months.{% endtrans %}</p>
 

+         <h1 class="font-weight-light">{% trans trimmed %}Download Fedora CoreOS.{% endtrans %}</h1>
 

+         <h5 class="font-weight-light">{% trans trimmed %}Run your containers today in the latest release of Fedora CoreOS.{% endtrans %}</h5>
 

          <p>{% trans trimmed mailing_link_start='<a href="https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/coreos-status@lists.fedoraproject.org/">'|safe, tracker_link_start='<a href="https://github.com/coreos/fedora-coreos-tracker">'|safe, link_end='</a>'|safe %}Subscribe to the {{ mailing_link_start}}coreos-status mailing list{{ link_end }} to receive important operational notices from the Fedora CoreOS team. Give feedback and follow Fedora CoreOS development in the {{ tracker_link_start }}Fedora CoreOS issue tracker{{ link_end }}.{% endtrans %}</p>
 

          <p>
 

            {% trans trimmed docs_link_start='<a href="https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-coreos/getting-started/">'|safe, link_end='</a>'|safe %}

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      <div class="row align-items-center">
 

        <div class="col-12 pt-5">
 

          <h1 class="font-weight-light">Fedora CoreOS.</h1>
 

-         <h5 class="font-weight-light">{% trans trimmed %}Preview an automatically updating Linux OS for containerized workloads.{% endtrans %}</h5>
 

+         <h5 class="font-weight-light">{% trans trimmed %}Automatically updating Linux OS for containerized workloads.{% endtrans %}</h5>
 

          <a class="btn btn-lg btn-outline-fedora-magenta mt-2" href="{{url_for('coreos_download', lang_code=lang_code)}}">{% trans trimmed %}Download Now{% endtrans %}</a>
 

        </div>
 

      </div>
 
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ 
 

      <div class="row">
 

        <div class="col-12">
 

          {% trans trimmed %}
 

-         Fedora CoreOS is an automatically-updating, minimal operating system for running containerized workloads securely and at scale. It is currently available for testing on a limited set of platforms, with more coming soon.
 

+         Fedora CoreOS is an automatically-updating, minimal operating system for running containerized workloads securely and at scale. It is currently available on multiple platforms, with more coming soon.
 

          {% endtrans %}
 

        </div>
 

      </div>

Removes preview related descriptions from overview and download page.

Signed-off-by: Allen Bai abai@redhat.com

cc @rfairley @jlebon
Please take a look if this looks reasonable.

screenshot of overview page
screenshot of download page

Note: basic removal of word preview is applied for now

Maybe something like:

Run your containers today in the latest release of Fedora CoreOS.

Let's just drop this line?

Maybe something like: Run production container workloads in the latest stable release of Fedora CoreOS.?

Others may have better opinions here.

can probably drop "for downloading", i.e.:

It is currently available on multiple platforms, with more coming soon.

Probably worth bikeshedding a little bit with others on the right wording. Will link them here.

Let's just drop this line?

SGTM

SGTM to drop this. I was wondering if we should have a message suggesting that users run a combination of stable/testing streams, but this may be better to contain on the docs site.

+1

LGTM

SGTM to drop this. I was wondering if we should have a message suggesting that users run a combination of stable/testing streams, but this may be better to contain on the docs site.

I was having this question too, it could be redundant to add too much descriptions in download page when docs site already covers a lot...

rebased onto 017c71da262a1bd8fab91ef919a3b19217c7aabf
4 years ago

Hmm, I think you deleted the wrong line here, right?

Removed "Try running containers in the latest preview release of Fedora CoreOS."

Dropped "for downloading"

Seconded. We shouldn't say "production workloads".

Ahh, sorry I didn't notice the line reference at the comment, and thought you were referencing the previous comment. Updating..

new overview page

new download page
Edited 4 years ago by abai

rebased onto 72c9876
4 years ago

LGTM!

Yup, LGTM too!

Pull-Request has been merged by rfairley
4 years ago
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