#86 Minor English improvements
Merged 3 years ago by lbrabec. Opened 3 years ago by jjames.
Unknown source master  into  master

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@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@

          {isLoading && !this.props.server_error ?

            <div className="container mt-4">

              <div className="alert alert-primary alert-dismissible fade show" role="alert">

-               It appears you are newcomer or haven't visited the Fedora Packager Dashboard in the last {this.props.caching_info.visits_required_every_n_days} days.

+               It appears you are a newcomer or haven't visited the Fedora Packager Dashboard in the last {this.props.caching_info.visits_required_every_n_days} days.

                Loading could take up to a few minutes, depending on number of packages you are maintaining.

                <button type="button" className="close" data-dismiss="alert" aria-label="Close">

                  <span aria-hidden="true">&times;</span>

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@@ -437,8 +437,8 @@

                  <h2 className="mt-4 text-left">Stats and tooltips</h2>

                  <p className="text-left">

                    On the top right, there are stats for each category (bugs, PRs, etc.). You can

-                   hover over the icons to see detailed tooltip or you can click the icon, to show

-                   only items from that category. Click again on the active filter, to reset it.

+                   hover over an icon to see a detailed tooltip, or you can click the icon to show

+                   only items from that category. Click again on the active filter to reset it.

                  </p>

                  <span

                    data-toggle="tooltip"
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@

              </div>

              <hr />

              <h2>Bugs, PRs, Updates, etc</h2>

-             This section shows all the items you can encounter in the dashboard. Data shown bellow

+             This section shows all the items you can encounter in the dashboard. Data shown below

              are for imaginary package foobar and are artificial, made only for this help page.

              Hover over the package name, title, icons, ... to see tooltips.

              <div className="row mt-4">
@@ -600,9 +600,9 @@

                <div className="col-md-6">

                  <h3>Koschei fails</h3>

                  <p>

-                   Koschei fail means that package fails to build from source (FTBFS), this is

-                   indicated by the badge near the package name. Koschei item shows release, link to

-                   the last successful build and time since.

+                   Koschei fail means the package fails to build from source (FTBFS), as indicated

+                   by the badge near the package name. The Koschei item shows release, link to

+                   the last successful build, and time since that build.

                  </p>

                  <Widget

                    title={pkg.name}
@@ -614,10 +614,10 @@

  

                  <h3 className="mt-4">Fedora-health-check fails</h3>

                  <p>

-                   Fedora-health-check fail means that package fails to install on a given

+                   Fedora-health-check fail means the package fails to install on a given

                    architecture (e.g. missing dependencies). Item shows release and list of arches.

-                   This item is expandable (denoted by <i className="fas fa-chevron-down"></i>),

-                   expansion shows problematic dependencies per arch.

+                   This item is expandable (denoted by <i className="fas fa-chevron-down"></i>).

+                   The expansion shows problematic dependencies per arch.

                    <br />

                  </p>

                  <Widget
@@ -635,8 +635,8 @@

                    occur (the package will start missing dependencies, because of the orphaning

                    process, either directly or indirectly). Item can be expanded (denoted by{" "}

                    <i className="fas fa-chevron-down"></i>) to show problematic dependencies (both

-                   direct and remote). Clicking on "show dependency network" opens modal window with

-                   dependency graph. Package bar directly affects the foobar package by being

+                   direct and remote). Clicking on "show dependency network" opens a modal window with

+                   a dependency graph. Package bar directly affects the foobar package by being

                    orphaned, and the package baz is an example of the indirect impact.

                  </p>

                  <Widget

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@

      }`

      const icon = isFTI ? "fa-file-medical-alt" : "fa-wrench"

      const tooltip = isFTI

-       ? "This is package fails to install"

+       ? "This package fails to install"

        : `Missing build dependencies on ${release}`

      const reasons_list = Object.entries(mergedProblems).map((r) => (

        <span key={title + r[0]}>

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

  

      return (

        <WidgetRow>

-         <WidgetHead type="This is package fails to build" icon="fa-wrench">

+         <WidgetHead type="This package fails to build" icon="fa-wrench">

            <WidgetTitle fulltitle={title}>

              <a target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" href={this.props.url}>{title}</a>

            </WidgetTitle>

This commit includes a few minor spelling, punctuation, and grammar improvements.

Pull-Request has been merged by lbrabec

3 years ago