PR#175: Technical accuracy review for below page : - fedora-docs/quick-docs

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		`To install a virtual operating system:`

		- . Run GNOME Boxes using the Super key and typing `Boxes`. In GNOME Boxes, click the New button.
		+ . Run GNOME Boxes using the Super key and type `Boxes`. In GNOME Boxes, click the + button and then Create a Virtual Machine.
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		`image::Boxes_new_machine.png[New machine]`

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		`image::Select_from_file.png[Select from file]`
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		`- . Choose your user name, password, and installation type.`
		`- +`
		`- image::Setup_machine.png[Setup machine]`
		`- +`
		`. Review your installation.`
		`+`
		`image::Installation_review.png[Installation review]`

modules/ROOT/pages/installing-virtual-systems-with-gnome-boxes.adoc

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		`:md: en-US/modules`
		`:imagesdir: ../images`

		`- include::{partialsdir}/unreviewed-message.adoc[]`
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		`GNOME Boxes is an application in GNOME Desktop Environment, which enables you to virtually access various operating systems.`

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rekha3034 commented 4 years ago

Technical accuracy review for below page :
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/quick-docs/installing-virtual-systems-with-gnome-boxes/

pbokoc commented 4 years ago

Hi Rekha, have you checked the procedure on the page on your own machine and made sure it works exactly as documented? If you have done so I'll merge this PR. Thanks!

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rekha3034 commented 4 years ago

Hi Petr,

In Fedora 31, the "Boxes" application show slightly changed gui. Do we need to change all the screenshots on the page too. Otherwise the options are more or less the same.

--Rekha

pbokoc commented 4 years ago

If you don't mind, grabbing new screenshots would be great. It shouldn't take too long.

If you're on GNOME (or Cinnamon), you can take a screenshot of the active window with Alt+PrtSc and a screenshot of an area with Shift+PrtSc. Then you can just overwrite the original images (they're in modules/ROOT/assets/images; you can easily find the filename of each image used on the page if you build the repo, go to the page, and right click each picture). Then commit and push to the same branch you created this PR from (install_virtualospage), the PR will be automatically updated with the new commit.

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