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mattdm commented a year ago | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago Clever use of a docs macro, but I don't love how the practical result is to repeat "Fedora leadership teams" three times in the first paragraph. It feels a little too much like generated text. This is a minor complaint for a policy document, but still, I'd love for it to feel a bit more human. | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago MInor wording quibble "benefits for ... to" is awkward phrasing. I suggest changing this line to | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago This expands to "Therefore Fedora leadership groups should be leaders", which is a tautology. Suggest just striking this line. | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago s/models/a model/ | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago Perhaps add "Other Fedora teams are also encouraged to follow this policy, but are not required to." | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago "heavier weight in terms of outages" and "degree of uptime reliability guaranteed" are the same thing, aren't they? I think we should also add that they use open source software under our direct control, rather than third-party and proprietary apps or websites. | ||
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ngompa commented a year ago The Fedora Mailing Lists are still official. Please do not omit it. | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago s/person(s)/people/ -- too legalese otherwise. | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago I feel like this is a "that escalated quickly!" line. I wasn't expecting antagonism. Do we need to say this at all? | ||
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mattdm commented a year ago Likewise, do we need this? It feels hostile. | ||
This commit introduces a new Fedora Council policy that deals with how
and where Fedora leadership groups communicate. At time of commit, this
policy is still in a draft form and has not yet had the required two-
week community feedback process required for adding or changing official
Fedora policies.
The rendered version you showed has this a "Fedora Leadership teams". Is this a change, or is that defined somewhere else? In any case, I think we should spell out exactly what is meant by the term near the beginning of this document somewhere -- I know it's not a long doc but it feels kind of inverted to learn the definition later.